Hopefully this doesn't sound like I'm begging for attention or something, but this seems to have been ignored. I don't mind that much, I'd just like to know what stuff needs improvement. Have people just not noticed it yet, does it really not have much wrong with it, or am I just too impatient?
On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 9:55 PM, ATMunn . <iamingodsa...@gmail.com> wrote: > Okay, the second draft is finished. I've changed a bunch of stuff, it's > almost a completely different proposal now. I've taken into consideration > almost everything Aris and Alexis mentioned, so I've given them > co-authorship as well. > I'm sure it's still got plenty of flaws. But it should be better. I'm just > going to post this and go to bed now. I'll see what people think in the > morning. > > Title: "A Reward for Obedience v2" > Author: ATMunn > Co-Author(s): Aris, Alexis > AI: 1 > > Create a new power-1 rule titled "Medals of Honour" > { > Medals of Honour are a destructible fixed currency tracked by the > Herald. > > [One note on this section here: I don't know whether or not it's > implied that players should be able to, by some means or another, challenge > whether or not a player is eligible if e believes it is invalid.] > In the first week of an Agoran Month, any player CAN declare emself to > be eligible for a Medal of Honour by announcement if all of the following > are true: > * E has made at least 1 message to a public forum in the last Agoran > month. > [I really don't like having to include this, but if I don't then > players that literally do nothing can be eligible for Medals of Honour.] > * E does not have negative Karma. > * In the last Agoran month, e has not had a Card issued to em. > [I'm not exactly sure how to word the broken pledge thing, so I've > left it out for now.] > > [I've never written a rule containing an Agoran Decision before, so > I'm sure there's lots of flaws in this. I mainly copied stuff from various > places in the rules.] > In the second week of an Agoran Month, if there are any players who > are eligible for a Medal of Honour, the Herald CAN, by announcement, and > SHALL in a timely fashion, initiate an Agoran Decision on who is to be > awarded a Medal of Honour. > For this decision, the valid votes are all players who are eligible > for a Medal of Honour, the vote collector is the Herald, and the voting > method is instant-runoff. > Upon the resolution of this decision, its outcome is awarded a Medal > of Honour. > > If, at any time, any player has 6 or more Medals of Honour, and e has > not won via this rule previously, e can win the game by announcement, > destroying all of eir Medals of Honour. > } > > On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 9:18 PM, ATMunn . <iamingodsa...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Thanks, both of you, for your suggestions. I'm working on a revised >> version at the moment. One idea I had, regarding what Alexis said about the >> idea of players declaring themselves eligible for a Badge of Honor, (now >> Medal of Honour) is the idea of the recordkeepor initiating an Agoran >> Decision on who will get the medal. All players who declared themselves >> eligible for a medal at the time of the initiation of the Agoran Decision >> would be the possible votes. This would ease the load on the recordkeepor >> even more, as e would only have to worry about initiating and resolving the >> election. >> >> On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 7:09 PM, Aris Merchant < >> thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote: >> >>> On Sat, Oct 14, 2017 at 8:50 AM, ATMunn . <iamingodsa...@gmail.com> >>> wrote: >>> > Title: A Reward for Obedience >>> > Author: ATMunn >>> > Co-Author(s): >>> > AI: 1 >>> > >>> > Create a new power-1 rule titled "Badges of Honor" >>> > { >>> > Badges of Honor are an indestructible, player-owned asset. The >>> Referee >>> > is the recordkeepor for Badges of Honor. >>> >>> I'd go with "Badges of Honor are a destructible fixed currency tracked >>> by the Referee" (which would make the holder restriction unnecessary), >>> or, if you want them to be transferable "Badges of Honor are a liquid >>> currency tracked by the Referee. Ownership of Badges of Honor is >>> restricted to players". >>> >>> I have three further comments. First, this might be something best >>> tracked by the Herald (maybe even the Tailor, as ribbons work on a >>> similar basis), who deals with matters of honor. E would have to check >>> the Referee's report, but right now the Referee has to check the >>> Herald's report, so there's really no change. Second, you should >>> probably change it not to have "badge" in the name, as badges are >>> already defined by Rule 2415. Third, you could consider having persons >>> be able to own them. If that was true, but gaining one was restricted >>> to players, the effect would be that a person who deregisters and >>> reregisters would get to keep eir badge count, the same way it is for >>> ribbons. >>> >>> -Aris >>> >> >> >