Oops. You already did. Sorry!
-Aris
On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:35 PM, Aris Merchant
<thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Going to fix that? Also, if you care to resubmit, would you include
> nichdel's proposed modification to the rewards rule in the general
> fixes proposal?
>
> -Aris
>
> On Wed, Aug 2, 2017 at 11:49 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> And I didn't fix my typo of dependent, twice. Goddamn.
>>
>> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:47 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> I pend the following two proposals: the 1st with AP &
>>> the 2nd with Shinies.
>>>
>>> Title: Cards are appealable, kinda
>>> AI: 2
>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>> replace the text
>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>> with
>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>> and replace the text
>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>> issue a
>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>> with
>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
>>> following information}}
>>>
>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>> AI: 3
>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>> replace the text
>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>> United States.
>>> }}
>>> with
>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>> United States.}}
>>>
>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>> replace the text
>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>> Consent, or
>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>> }}
>>> with
>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>> Consent,
>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>> }}
>>>
>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>> 2143}}
>>> replace the text
>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>> is to create
>>> more informed population.}}
>>> With
>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
>>> Agora
>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>> informed population.}}
>>>
>>> In the rule currently not assigned a number called "Rewards", replace the
>>> text
>>> {{ * Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies.}}
>>> with
>>> {{ *Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies. This reward can be
>>> claimed a
>>> maximum of once per office per week for a weekly report, and once per office
>>> per month for a monthly report.}}
>>>
>>> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 3:33 PM, Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote:
>>>> I would appreciate if you separated the change to Cards into a separate
>>>> proposal. It is not minor, though it is a fix.
>>>>
>>>> Beyond that, this is grand. Thank you for undertaking this. I suspect that
>>>> fix to 1728, in particular, is urgent.
>>>>
>>>> -o
>>>>
>>>>> On Jul 31, 2017, at 12:37 AM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>>>> AI: 3
>>>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>>>> replace the text
>>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to
>>>>> the
>>>>> United States.
>>>>> }}
>>>>> with
>>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>>>> United States.}}
>>>>>
>>>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>>>> replace the text
>>>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>>> Consent, or
>>>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>>> }}
>>>>> with
>>>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>>> Consent,
>>>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>>> }}
>>>>>
>>>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>>>> 2143}}
>>>>> replace the text
>>>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>>>> is to create
>>>>> more informed population.}}
>>>>> With
>>>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant
>>>>> to Agora
>>>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>>>> informed population.}}
>>>>>
>>>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>>>> replace the text
>>>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>>>> with
>>>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>>>> and replace the text
>>>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>>>> issue a
>>>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>>>> with
>>>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes
>>>>> the
>>>>> following information}}
>>>>>
>>>>> --
>>>>>> From V.J Rada
>>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> --
>>> From V.J Rada
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> From V.J Rada
