And I didn't fix my typo of dependent, twice. Goddamn.
On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:47 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
> I pend the following two proposals: the 1st with AP &
> the 2nd with Shinies.
>
> Title: Cards are appealable, kinda
> AI: 2
> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
> replace the text
> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
> with
> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
> and replace the text
> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to issue a
> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
> with
> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
> following information}}
>
> Title: Minor fixes
> Author: V.J Rada
> AI: 3
> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
> replace the text
> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to the
> United States.
> }}
> with
> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
> United States.}}
>
> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
> replace the text
> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran Consent,
> or
> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
> }}
> with
> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
> Consent,
> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
> }}
>
> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule 2143}}
> replace the text
> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
> is to create
> more informed population.}}
> With
> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
> Agora
> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
> informed population.}}
>
> In the rule currently not assigned a number called "Rewards", replace the text
> {{ * Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies.}}
> with
> {{ *Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies. This reward can be
> claimed a
> maximum of once per office per week for a weekly report, and once per office
> per month for a monthly report.}}
>
> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 3:33 PM, Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote:
>> I would appreciate if you separated the change to Cards into a separate
>> proposal. It is not minor, though it is a fix.
>>
>> Beyond that, this is grand. Thank you for undertaking this. I suspect that
>> fix to 1728, in particular, is urgent.
>>
>> -o
>>
>>> On Jul 31, 2017, at 12:37 AM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>> AI: 3
>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>> replace the text
>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>> United States.
>>> }}
>>> with
>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>> United States.}}
>>>
>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>> replace the text
>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>> Consent, or
>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>> }}
>>> with
>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>> Consent,
>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>> }}
>>>
>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>> 2143}}
>>> replace the text
>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>> is to create
>>> more informed population.}}
>>> With
>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
>>> Agora
>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>> informed population.}}
>>>
>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>> replace the text
>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>> with
>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>> and replace the text
>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>> issue a
>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>> with
>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
>>> following information}}
>>>
>>> --
>>>> From V.J Rada
>>
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