Going to fix that? Also, if you care to resubmit, would you include
nichdel's proposed modification to the rewards rule in the general
fixes proposal?
-Aris
On Wed, Aug 2, 2017 at 11:49 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
> And I didn't fix my typo of dependent, twice. Goddamn.
>
> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:47 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> I pend the following two proposals: the 1st with AP &
>> the 2nd with Shinies.
>>
>> Title: Cards are appealable, kinda
>> AI: 2
>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>> replace the text
>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>> with
>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>> and replace the text
>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to issue
>> a
>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>> with
>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
>> following information}}
>>
>> Title: Minor fixes
>> Author: V.J Rada
>> AI: 3
>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>> replace the text
>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>> United States.
>> }}
>> with
>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>> United States.}}
>>
>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>> replace the text
>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran Consent,
>> or
>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>> }}
>> with
>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>> Consent,
>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>> }}
>>
>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule 2143}}
>> replace the text
>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>> is to create
>> more informed population.}}
>> With
>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
>> Agora
>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>> informed population.}}
>>
>> In the rule currently not assigned a number called "Rewards", replace the
>> text
>> {{ * Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies.}}
>> with
>> {{ *Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies. This reward can be
>> claimed a
>> maximum of once per office per week for a weekly report, and once per office
>> per month for a monthly report.}}
>>
>> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 3:33 PM, Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote:
>>> I would appreciate if you separated the change to Cards into a separate
>>> proposal. It is not minor, though it is a fix.
>>>
>>> Beyond that, this is grand. Thank you for undertaking this. I suspect that
>>> fix to 1728, in particular, is urgent.
>>>
>>> -o
>>>
>>>> On Jul 31, 2017, at 12:37 AM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>>> AI: 3
>>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to
>>>> the
>>>> United States.
>>>> }}
>>>> with
>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>>> United States.}}
>>>>
>>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>> Consent, or
>>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>> }}
>>>> with
>>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>> Consent,
>>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>> }}
>>>>
>>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>>> 2143}}
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>>> is to create
>>>> more informed population.}}
>>>> With
>>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
>>>> Agora
>>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>>> informed population.}}
>>>>
>>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>>> with
>>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>>> and replace the text
>>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>>> issue a
>>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>>> with
>>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
>>>> following information}}
>>>>
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>>>>> From V.J Rada
>>>
>>
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>> From V.J Rada
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