On Sat, 24 Jun 2017, Owen Jacobson wrote:
> A pledge MAY be considered broken if the pledgor does
Using MAY here is grammatically odd to me. Do you mean "might"?
Or do you mean (using the definition of MAY) that it is not against
the rules to "perform the action" of considering the pledge to be
broken, whatever that means?
Other comment: pledges may often have their own time limits, so
the timely manner should be a default, not an override as written.
Minor nit: "pledgor" is ugly. That tradition for Office names need not
be extended to words that have correctly-spelled words like pledger
already.
