I like this revision because it seems to have closed the loopholes of the last one. However, one issue I see is if the member of the Organization leaves, it is unclear what occurs. For your ease, I have compiled my suggested revisions below:
Create the power-1.5 rule “Internal State” with this text: { An Agency or Organization’s Internal State is state that is defined by the Agency or Organization’s text (Power or Charter), but not by any rules. An Agency or Organization has a Responsible Player for each part of its Internal State; the Responsible Player SHALL publish a weekly report describing that part of the state. If an organization or agency’s text states that it wishes to use self-ratifying reports, then portions of the report that describe this state are self-ratifying. The responsible player for all of an Agency’s state is that agency’s Head. An Organization’s Charter must define a member of the organization as the Responsible Player for each portion of its state; any player can destroy an organization which does not do so with 1 week Notice. If the member leaves the organization, any member may publish the report and the player with the highest budget switch SHALL do so in a timely manner. } ---- Publius Scribonius Scholasticus p.scribonius.scholasti...@gmail.com > On May 30, 2017, at 2:47 AM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote: > > OK, this is plain embarrassing. > > I retract “State of the Union." > > I create this AI-1.5 proposal “State of the Union v2” by Gaelan, PSS and > Aris: < > Create the power-1.5 rule “Internal State” with this text: { > An Agency or Organization’s Internal State is state that is defined by the > Agency or Organization’s text (Power or Charter), but not by any rules. An > Agency or Organization has a Responsible Player for each part of its Internal > State; the Responsible Player SHALL publish a weekly report describing that > state. If an organization or agency’s text states that it wishes to use > self-ratifying reports, then portions of the report that describe this state > are self-ratifying. > The responsible player for all of an Agency’s state is that agency’s Head. An > Organization’s Charter must define a member of the organization as the > Responsible Player for each portion of its state; any player can destroy an > organization which does not do so with 1 week Notice. > } > > > > Gaelan > >> On May 29, 2017, at 11:46 PM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote: >> >> I retract “State of the Union." >> >> I create this AI-1.5 proposal “State of the Union v2” by Gaelan, PSS and >> Aris: < >> Create the power-1.5 rule “Internal State” with this text: { >> An Agency or Organization’s Internal State is state that is defined by the >> Agency or Organization’s text (Power or Charter), but not by any rules. An >> Agency or Organization has a Responsible Player for each part of its >> Internal State; the Responsible Player SHALL publish a weekly report >> describing that state. If an organization or agency’s text states that it >> wishes to use self-ratifying reports, then portions of the report that >> describe this state are self-ratifying. >> The responsible player for all of an Agency’s state is that agency’s Head. >> An Organization’s Charter must define a member of the organization as the >> Responsible Player for each portion of its state; any player can destroy an >> organization which does not do so with 1 week Notice. >> } >> > >> >> Gaelan >>> On May 28, 2017, at 3:41 PM, Aris Merchant >>> <thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote: >>> >>> On Sun, May 28, 2017 at 2:20 PM, Gaelan Steele <g...@canishe.com> wrote: >>>> I create this AI-1.5 proposal “State of the Union” by Gaelan: < >>>> >>>> Create the power-1.5 rule “Internal State” with this text: { >>>> >>>> An Agency or Organization’s Internal State is state that is defined by the >>>> Agency or Organization’s text (Power or Charter), but not by any rules. >>>> >>>> An Agency or Organization has a Responsible Player for each part of its >>>> Internal State; the Responsible Player SHALL publish a weekly report >>>> describing that state. The portion of such a report that describes this >>>> state is self-ratifying. >>>> >>>> The responsible player for all of an Agency’s state is that agency’s Head. >>>> An Organization’s Charter must define a Responsible Player for all of its >>>> state; any player can destroy an organization which does not do so with 1 >>>> week Notice. >>>> >>>> } >>>> >>>>> >>>> >>>> This is a half-proto; I’ll retract it if changes are required or pend it if >>>> they are not. >>> >>> Several problems. The worst one that you're imposing obligations on a >>> person who need not be a member of the organization. I'd also suggest >>> making the self-ratifying bit optional, although I can see arguments >>> for and against that. >>> >>> -Aris >> >