On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 5:23 PM, Quazie <quazieno...@gmail.com> wrote: > Proposal: "Betterer Pledges" AI=1.7 Coauthor='G., Gaelan, Aris' > {{{ > Replace the text of Rule 2450 with the following: > {{{ > A pledge is an agreement between a player and Agora. > > Breaking a publicly-made pledge is a cardable offense. > > If a publicly-made pledge says that the creator of a pledge will do > something, > without providing a time limit, then e SHALL in a timely manner in order > to not > break said pledge. > > A player SHALL NOT make any pledge that would create new obligations for > any other person. > }}} > }}} >
I'm not sure of what other people will think about the "between a player and Agora" bit, and its possible effects. I'd change that last "SHALL NOT" to a "CANNOT", which is more secure. The only reason I didn't do that in my pledge is because pledges can't limit possible actions in that way. Other than that, looks great. Thanks for the proposal, and for being so responsive! -Aris