On Mon, 2015-01-19 at 10:20 +0000, Jan Beulich wrote: > >>> On 16.01.15 at 20:52, <ijack...@chiark.greenend.org.uk> wrote: > > --- a/security_vulnerability_process.html > > +++ b/security_vulnerability_process.html > > @@ -212,6 +212,17 @@ following:</p> > > <li>The assigned XSA number</li> > > <li>The planned disclosure date</li> > > </ul> > > +<p>List members may, if (and only if) the Security Team grants > > +permission, deploy fixed versions during the embargo. Permission for > > ..., may deploy ... ?
The may is before the first comma, which is where it should be I think. (Lars' suggestion to reword entirely notwithstanding) Ian. _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xen.org http://lists.xen.org/xen-devel
