yeKcim wrote: > Code improvements: > - A lot of network bugfixes (synchro, win32 network support,...) "bug fixes" (two words) > - Fix fullscreen on Windows "full screen" (two words again) > - Fix memory leaks > - Cleaner code, delete useless code "Cleaner code, with useless code deleted" > - Add debug messages > - Faster compilation > - Simplify some calculations > - More beautiful water "Made the water more beautiful" (the original isn't valid English) > - Camera improvement "improvements" (it sounds more natural plural, or else "Improved the camera") > Menu: > - Better widgets in menus > - Language selection in Options menu > - Small enhancement of Results menu > - Options menu accessible from game with F11 key > - Main menu can be keyboard driven > Data: > - New maps : hive, moon-4m, pillars, tic-tac-toe, towers, funkyisland > - Monkey-bubble music for monkey-bubble map > - Some graphism improvements (map previews, skins,...) "graphics" (graphism isn't a word) > - Add some skins positions (what does this mean to the non-developer?) > - Characters' eyes following cursor "follow" (not following) > - Add some sounds "Add new sounds" > - Updated translations > New features: > - Smaller step in angle selection when pressing Shift > - Joystick support > - Initial management of command line options > Still experimental : > - Better AI (but still stupid) > - Improved random level generator >
I would personally write the whole thing in the past tense, since there are some tense changes, but that isn't quite as bad as other problems. Also, some words have a space before the ":" and some don't. I would remove all the spaces before the colons. kyle _______________________________________________ Wormux-dev mailing list Wormux-dev@gna.org https://mail.gna.org/listinfo/wormux-dev