yeKcim wrote:
> Code improvements:
>    - A lot of network bugfixes (synchro, win32 network support,...)
"bug fixes" (two words)
>    - Fix fullscreen on Windows
"full screen" (two words again)
>    - Fix memory leaks
>    - Cleaner code, delete useless code
"Cleaner code, with useless code deleted"
>    - Add debug messages
>    - Faster compilation
>    - Simplify some calculations
>    - More beautiful water
"Made the water more beautiful" (the original isn't valid English)
>    - Camera improvement
"improvements" (it sounds more natural plural, or else "Improved the 
camera")
> Menu:
>    - Better widgets in menus
>    - Language selection in Options menu
>    - Small enhancement of Results menu
>    - Options menu accessible from game with F11 key
>    - Main menu can be keyboard driven
> Data:
>    - New maps : hive, moon-4m, pillars, tic-tac-toe, towers, funkyisland
>    - Monkey-bubble music for monkey-bubble map
>    - Some graphism improvements (map previews, skins,...)
"graphics" (graphism isn't a word)
>    - Add some skins positions
(what does this mean to the non-developer?)
>    - Characters' eyes following cursor
"follow" (not following)
>    - Add some sounds
"Add new sounds"
>    - Updated translations
> New features:
>    - Smaller step in angle selection when pressing Shift
>    - Joystick support
>    - Initial management of command line options
> Still experimental :
>    - Better AI (but still stupid)
>    - Improved random level generator
> 

I would personally write the whole thing in the past tense, since there 
are some tense changes, but that isn't quite as bad as other problems.
Also, some words have a space before the ":" and some don't. I would 
remove all the spaces before the colons.

kyle



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