I really appreciate them! Thank you John. Massimo
On Jun 1, 10:32 pm, JohnMc <maruadventu...@gmail.com> wrote: > Massimo, > > Please take these corrections as I want you to look good, not > criticism: > > Slide 11: 'Editing an...' Probably should be 'Editing app....' > Slide 14: 'click to ajax...' Probably should be 'click for Ajax...' > Slide 15: 'Views can extend a other...' Should be 'Views can extend > other...' > Slide 16: 'The...' to 'They...' > Slide 17: Typo on the first bullet, 'include' > Slide 18: Typo on first bullet, ca --> can > Slide 45: 'Menu are...' to 'Menus are...' > Check Capitalization second bullet > Slide 47 '...meta tages...' to '...meta tags...' > Slide 53 First bullet, first auth is misspelled. > Slide 54 First bullet, 'hat, give' --> 'that, given' > Slide 56 First bullet, 'allows to embed' --> 'provides embed' > Third bullet, 'that are execute' --> 'that are > executed' > > Chalk it up to I had a English teacher who cracked a whip! :) > > But is a great presentation. > > JohnMc > > On Jun 1, 9:31 pm, mdipierro <mdipie...@cs.depaul.edu> wrote: > > > I posted another version. Now it is twice as long. still lots to say > > but please send me feedback. > > >http://www.web2py.com/examples/static/cookbook2.pdf > > > Massimo > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "web2py Web Framework" group. To post to this group, send email to web2py@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to web2py+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/web2py?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
