Massimo,
Please take these corrections as I want you to look good, not
criticism:
Slide 11: 'Editing an...' Probably should be 'Editing app....'
Slide 14: 'click to ajax...' Probably should be 'click for Ajax...'
Slide 15: 'Views can extend a other...' Should be 'Views can extend
other...'
Slide 16: 'The...' to 'They...'
Slide 17: Typo on the first bullet, 'include'
Slide 18: Typo on first bullet, ca --> can
Slide 45: 'Menu are...' to 'Menus are...'
Check Capitalization second bullet
Slide 47 '...meta tages...' to '...meta tags...'
Slide 53 First bullet, first auth is misspelled.
Slide 54 First bullet, 'hat, give' --> 'that, given'
Slide 56 First bullet, 'allows to embed' --> 'provides embed'
Third bullet, 'that are execute' --> 'that are
executed'
Chalk it up to I had a English teacher who cracked a whip! :)
But is a great presentation.
JohnMc
On Jun 1, 9:31 pm, mdipierro <mdipie...@cs.depaul.edu> wrote:
> I posted another version. Now it is twice as long. still lots to say
> but please send me feedback.
>
> http://www.web2py.com/examples/static/cookbook2.pdf
>
> Massimo
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