Hi Radu, Thanks for picking this up. We are currently past the writing freeze for the first release of the manual, which means there can be no more changes to content, however we are looking at releasing a second edition in a couple of months so we will make the necessary change then as per your suggestion.
To help us keep track of your suggestion, could you submit the bug report here: http://ubuntu-manual.org/bugs That way we can make sure it isn't forgotten! Kind regards, Jamin On Thu, Apr 8, 2010 at 5:43 AM, Radu Cotescu <r...@cotescu.com> wrote: > Hello everybody, > > While translating the Ubuntu Manual into Romanian on Launchpad, I have > found an awkward phrase: > > In some cases, your computer will run as normal and appear not to recognize > the > Ubuntu \acronym{CD} is present as it starts up. > > My suggestion regarding this one would be: > > In some cases, your computer will run as normal and appear not to recognize > that the Ubuntu \acronym{CD} is present when it starts up. > > I have chosen this form to elude the second "as" and to offer a plus of > clarity. This phrase is located in ./installation/installation.tex :45. > Since I haven't checked out the repository using Bazaar, I kindly ask one of > you to submit this change. > > What do you think about this? > > Best regards, > Radu > -- > [image: Radu Cotescu] <http://radu.cotescu.com> > Radu Cotescu | Software Developer, Tech Blogger, Author > Web: radu.cotescu.com Email: r...@cotescu.com Cell: +40 744 406 353 > > _______________________________________________ > Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > Post to : ubuntu-manual@lists.launchpad.net > Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual > More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp > >
<<radu.cotescu.com.png>>
_______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual Post to : ubuntu-manual@lists.launchpad.net Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
