Hi Jared, I tweaked slightly the "Version 2" you added to the wiki. I have preserved your version and added mine below.
Thanks, Sam On Tue, Aug 16, 2011 at 9:30 PM, <ubuntu-au-requ...@lists.ubuntu.com> wrote: > Send ubuntu-au mailing list submissions to > ubuntu-au@lists.ubuntu.com > > To subscribe or unsubscribe via the World Wide Web, visit > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-au > or, via email, send a message with subject or body 'help' to > ubuntu-au-requ...@lists.ubuntu.com > > You can reach the person managing the list at > ubuntu-au-ow...@lists.ubuntu.com > > When replying, please edit your Subject line so it is more specific > than "Re: Contents of ubuntu-au digest..." > > > Today's Topics: > > 1. Mission Statement (Jared Norris) > 2. Re: Mission Statement (Benjamin Donald-Wilson) > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Message: 1 > Date: Tue, 16 Aug 2011 20:13:56 +1000 > From: Jared Norris <jrnor...@gmail.com> > To: ubuntu-au@lists.ubuntu.com > Subject: Mission Statement > Message-ID: > <CAF4+eiW1Ud=7wfoyff_9kk8yjgw3s_dfjstfzk6_qshhqjt...@mail.gmail.com > > > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 > > Good evening, > > Following some good constructive feedback I've attempted to reword the > draft of the mission statement slightly to make it read better. If you > can please check it out [0] and let me know if it's heading in the > right direction that would be great. If anyone else has any sort of > feedback or want to rewrite it again please feel free to do so on the > wiki page just make sure you make clear who has written what so it's > easy to follow. > > [0] https://wiki.ubuntu.com/AustralianTeam/MissionStatement#Consolidation > > -- > Regards, > > Jared Norris JP(Qual) BBehSc(Psych) > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/JaredNorris > > > > ------------------------------ > > Message: 2 > Date: Tue, 16 Aug 2011 20:35:55 +1000 > From: Benjamin Donald-Wilson <benjamin.donald.wilso...@gmail.com> > To: Jared Norris <jrnor...@gmail.com> > Cc: ubuntu-au@lists.ubuntu.com > Subject: Re: Mission Statement > Message-ID: > <CAHy=u99cu10rbjfkyj8qb3nem38tj8_vhcmi7j4rsjxjqra...@mail.gmail.com > > > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 > > Hay all, > > I think it is a great job from last month not really having one to > now! Well done team. :) > =========== > Thanks, > > Ben Donald-Wilson > > > > On Tue, Aug 16, 2011 at 20:13, Jared Norris <jrnor...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Good evening, > > > > Following some good constructive feedback I've attempted to reword the > > draft of the mission statement slightly to make it read better. If you > > can please check it out [0] and let me know if it's heading in the > > right direction that would be great. If anyone else has any sort of > > feedback or want to rewrite it again please feel free to do so on the > > wiki page just make sure you make clear who has written what so it's > > easy to follow. > > > > [0] > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/AustralianTeam/MissionStatement#Consolidation > > > > -- > > Regards, > > > > Jared Norris JP(Qual) BBehSc(Psych) > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/JaredNorris > > > > -- > > ubuntu-au mailing list > > ubuntu-au@lists.ubuntu.com > > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-au > > > > > > ------------------------------ > > -- > ubuntu-au mailing list > ubuntu-au@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-au > > > End of ubuntu-au Digest, Vol 66, Issue 9 > **************************************** >
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