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The previous pictograms on the back were better. The current ones don't have
any connection with the text-circles above them and seem meaningless on
their own in this context. After re-reading your message I saw that they are
explained in the text beneath them, but they are not visually related to it
and, more importantly, I think the icons should explain the text, not vice
versa.

Tux placed in Certificate pictogram definitely looks better than on a
sticker. I don't understand why did you color Tux with a different shade of
aubergine than ubuntu logo at the bottom, different colors look illogical
and irritating.

Text kerning on the front side is MUCH better, but it can be improved even
more.

The "ubuntu", "gnome" and "32-bit" icons on the side are now aligned with
the front and back headers, nice!

Dots around "linux for human beings" make this line look complicated. I
don't understand their purpose either.

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