Thanks for the review.
I'm not a native speaker but I'm afraid this sentence may be read as 'encrypting more of the traffic' and 'removing primitives" are examples of known deficiencies, not fixes. Maybe rephrase as '...it fixes most known deficiencies with TLS 1.2 [TLS12]. In particular, TLS 1.3 encrypting more..."? This is a very good idea, thanks!
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