Reviewer: Jen Linkova Review result: Ready The document is clearly written and easy to understand even by people who knows very little about TLS (like this reviewer ;) I think the document has no negative impact on deployments: quite the opposite, it might motivate people to move to TLS1.3.
I think the document is ready. I do have a minor editorial comment, feel free to address or ignore: "Use of TLS 1.3 [TLS13] is growing, and it fixes most known deficiencies with TLS 1.2 [TLS12], such as encrypting more of the traffic so that it is not readable by outsiders and removing most cryptographic primitives now considered weak" I'm not a native speaker but I'm afraid this sentence may be read as 'encrypting more of the traffic' and 'removing primitives" are examples of known deficiencies, not fixes. Maybe rephrase as '...it fixes most known deficiencies with TLS 1.2 [TLS12]. In particular, TLS 1.3 encrypting more..."? _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list -- tls@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to tls-le...@ietf.org
