Looks good. I would remove the trailing paren instead though. On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 12:08 PM RFC Errata System <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8422, > "Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security > (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5466 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Masato Gosui <mgo...@yahoo-corp.jp> > > Section: 5.3 > > Original Text > ------------- > Actions of the sender: > > The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and conveys it > to the client in the Certificate message. If the client has used a > Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the server's > certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic curves. A > server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an ECC > cipher suite in its ServerHello message.) > > Corrected Text > -------------- > Actions of the sender: > > The server constructs an appropriate certificate chain and conveys it > to the client in the Certificate message. If the client has used a > Supported Elliptic Curves Extension, the public key in the server's > certificate MUST respect the client's choice of elliptic curves. (A > server that cannot satisfy this requirement MUST NOT choose an ECC > cipher suite in its ServerHello message.) > > Notes > ----- > This adds the missing opening parenthesis of the last sentence of the > "Actions of the sender" paragraph. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC8422 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc4492bis-17) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for > Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier > Publication Date : August 2018 > Author(s) : Y. Nir, S. Josefsson, M. Pegourie-Gonnard > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Transport Layer Security > Area : Security > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG > > _______________________________________________ > TLS mailing list > TLS@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
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