The double “the” got fixed, but the double and didn’t I submitted a PR so we don’t forget this.
spt > On Mar 4, 2018, at 22:52, M K Saravanan <mksa...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > In TLSv1.3, draft 26, there is a small typographical error. It needs > to be corrected. > > > (1) > > Appendix D. Backward Compatibility > > Second Paragraph. Second sentence. There is a double "and". > > /* Original */ > ========= > Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long > as > the ClientHello format remains compatible and and there is at least > one protocol version supported by both the client and the server. > ========== > > /* Corrected */ > > ====== > Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long > as > the ClientHello format remains compatible and there is at least > one protocol version supported by both the client and the server. > ====== > > (2) > > Section 4.2.8.2. ECDHE Parameters > > First paragraph, first sentence. There is a double "the". > > /* Original */ > ========= > ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the the > opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure. > ========= > > /* Corrected */ > ========= > ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the > opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure. > ========= > > (3) > > Appendix E.5. Replay Attacks on 0-RTT > > Second paragraph, second line. There is a double "the". > > /* Original */ > =========== > If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks > become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the the > speed of cryptographic operations. > =========== > > /* Corrected */ > ========== > If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks > become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the > speed of cryptographic operations. > ========== > > Please correct them. > > with regards, > Saravanan > > _______________________________________________ > TLS mailing list > TLS@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list TLS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
