Hi Zahed,

I have updated the charter text so if you are happy please update your ballot 
accordingly.

Jim

From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zahed.sarker.i...@gmail.com>
Date: Wednesday, November 27, 2024 at 11:42 AM
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.i...@gmail.com>
Cc: spring@ietf.org <spring@ietf.org>, The IESG <i...@ietf.org>, 
spring-cha...@ietf.org <spring-cha...@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Zaheduzzaman Sarker's Block on charter-ietf-spring-02-01: (with 
BLOCK)
Looks excellent to me. Thanks Alvaro!!

// Zahed

On Wed, 27 Nov 2024 at 17:06, Alvaro Retana 
<aretana.i...@gmail.com<mailto:aretana.i...@gmail.com>> wrote:
On November 27, 2024 at 3:54:14 AM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker wrote:


Zahed:

Hi!

...
> I think the following would be helpful to understand the intention better .
> it's a suggestion only and should depict what I am after, free to
> amend/reject.
>
> -- The SPRING WG is responsible for protocol-independent general architecture
> or framework work. The protocol specific modification of, or extension to the
> existing architecture, data planes, or control or management plane protocols
> should be carried out in the WGs responsible for the same. Those work would
> be benefited by coordinating with the spring working group, if necessary,
> those work can be carried out in the SPRING WG after agreement with all the
> relevant WGs chairs and responsible ADs. --

The paragraph with the long sentence talks about avoiding
modifications, while the next paragraph is about scoping.  Suggestion:

OLD>

   The work in the SPRING WG should avoid modification to existing data
   planes that would make them incompatible with existing deployments.
   Where possible, existing control and management plane protocols must
   be used within existing architectures to implement the SPRING
   function. Any modification of -or extension to- existing
   architectures, data planes, or control or management plane protocols
   should be carried out in the WGs responsible for the architecture,
   data plane, or control or management plane protocol being modified
   and in coordination with the SPRING WG, but may be done in SPRING WG
   after agreement with all the relevant WG chairs and responsible Area
   Directors.

   The SPRING WG defines procedures that allow an SR node to steer a packet
   through an SR Policy instantiated as an ordered list of instructions
   called segments without needing per-path state information at transit
   nodes. A network comprising only SR nodes can achieve full path
   control (through loose or strict path specification). However, SR
   nodes must interoperate through loose routing in existing networks.


NEW>

   The work in the SPRING WG should avoid modification to existing data
   planes that would make them incompatible with existing deployments.
   Existing protocols must be used within existing architectures to
   implement the SPRING function where possible. Any modification or
   extension of existing architectures, data planes, or protocols should
   be carried out in the WGs responsible for them and in coordination
   with the SPRING WG. Alternatively, after agreement among the relevant
   WG chairs and Area Directors, such work may be done in the SPRING WG.

   The SPRING WG defines protocol-independent procedures that allow an SR
   node to steer a packet...


I simplified the initial paragraph following your suggestions and
added the protocol-independent part to the second one.

Thoughts?


Thanks!

Alvaro.
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