Looks excellent to me. Thanks Alvaro!!

// Zahed

On Wed, 27 Nov 2024 at 17:06, Alvaro Retana <aretana.i...@gmail.com> wrote:

> On November 27, 2024 at 3:54:14 AM, Zaheduzzaman Sarker wrote:
>
>
> Zahed:
>
> Hi!
>
> ...
> > I think the following would be helpful to understand the intention
> better .
> > it's a suggestion only and should depict what I am after, free to
> > amend/reject.
> >
> > -- The SPRING WG is responsible for protocol-independent general
> architecture
> > or framework work. The protocol specific modification of, or extension
> to the
> > existing architecture, data planes, or control or management plane
> protocols
> > should be carried out in the WGs responsible for the same. Those work
> would
> > be benefited by coordinating with the spring working group, if necessary,
> > those work can be carried out in the SPRING WG after agreement with all
> the
> > relevant WGs chairs and responsible ADs. --
>
> The paragraph with the long sentence talks about avoiding
> modifications, while the next paragraph is about scoping.  Suggestion:
>
> OLD>
>
>    The work in the SPRING WG should avoid modification to existing data
>    planes that would make them incompatible with existing deployments.
>    Where possible, existing control and management plane protocols must
>    be used within existing architectures to implement the SPRING
>    function. Any modification of -or extension to- existing
>    architectures, data planes, or control or management plane protocols
>    should be carried out in the WGs responsible for the architecture,
>    data plane, or control or management plane protocol being modified
>    and in coordination with the SPRING WG, but may be done in SPRING WG
>    after agreement with all the relevant WG chairs and responsible Area
>    Directors.
>
>    The SPRING WG defines procedures that allow an SR node to steer a packet
>    through an SR Policy instantiated as an ordered list of instructions
>    called segments without needing per-path state information at transit
>    nodes. A network comprising only SR nodes can achieve full path
>    control (through loose or strict path specification). However, SR
>    nodes must interoperate through loose routing in existing networks.
>
>
> NEW>
>
>    The work in the SPRING WG should avoid modification to existing data
>    planes that would make them incompatible with existing deployments.
>    Existing protocols must be used within existing architectures to
>    implement the SPRING function where possible. Any modification or
>    extension of existing architectures, data planes, or protocols should
>    be carried out in the WGs responsible for them and in coordination
>    with the SPRING WG. Alternatively, after agreement among the relevant
>    WG chairs and Area Directors, such work may be done in the SPRING WG.
>
>    The SPRING WG defines protocol-independent procedures that allow an SR
>    node to steer a packet...
>
>
> I simplified the initial paragraph following your suggestions and
> added the protocol-independent part to the second one.
>
> Thoughts?
>
>
> Thanks!
>
> Alvaro.
>
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