Thank you.  That works for me.  I hope others agree.

Yours,

Joel


On 8/10/2023 11:04 AM, chengweiqiang wrote:
Hi Joel,
We've submitted the new version as following link:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-02.txt

Please review it.

Best Regards,
Weiqiang


---原始邮件---
* 发件人:* Joel Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com>
* 发送时间:*  2023-08-09 20:30:49
* 收件人:*  Weiqiang Cheng <chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>
spring <spring@ietf.org>
* 主题:* Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification fordraft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

I look forward to seeing a draft with these changes.

Yours,

Joel


On 8/9/2023 2:43 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:

    Dear Joel,

    Thank you for sharing your comments. We would like to address each
    of your points as follows:

    Firstly, we will explicitly state that the CPE must be
    operator-managed in the text.

    Secondly, we understand your reservations about the assumption of
    multi-operator trust domains. We will only cover the situations
    where different arms of the same company operate their portions of
    the network separately but trust each other.

    Lastly, we appreciate your suggestion to rephrase the text
    accompanying Figure 1 to make it an active statement about the
    requirement for all relevant components to be part of a single
    trust domain. We will update the text accordingly.

    Once again, thank you for bringing these comments.

    Best regards,

    Weiqiang



        *From:* Joel Halpern <mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>
        *Date:* 2023-08-08 22:27
        *To:* Weiqiang Cheng <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>;
        spring <mailto:spring@ietf.org>
        *Subject:* Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification for
        draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

        I have three concerns with this.  The first concern is that I
        do not see where the text is explicit that the CPE MUST be
        operator-managed.   That seems to me to be necessary no matter
        what one assumes about operator relationships.


        The second concern is about the assumption of multi-operator
        trust domains.  If by that you mean a situation where multiple
        arms of the same company operate their portions of the network
        separately, but trust each other, then yes, I understand how
        that can be a single trust domain.  However, that is a single
        operator, not multi-operator.  I have never seen any siutation
        in which actually distinct operators trust each other and
        trust each other's security mechanisms enough to be treated as
        a single trust domain.   And what little text we have defining
        trust domains does not suggest such an interpretation.  I am
        not comfortable with that, and I would expect pushback when we
        as a WG tried to publish the document if we made such an
        assertion.


        Third, as a lesser matter, I would prefer if the text that
        went with figure one started with "This deployment assumes
        that all of the relevvent componenbts in figure one are part
        of a single trust domain".  That is an active statement about
        a requirement by this document, not a passive observation.


        Yours,

        Joel


        On 8/7/2023 10:01 PM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:

            Hi Joel,
            Thank you very much for your comments.
            I agree that all network elements, such as BRAS, CRx,
            Backbone, and CPE, belong to the same operator, and this
            scenario indeed constitutes a trusted domain. However, a
            trusted domain can indeed extend beyond a single operator.
            In cases where multiple operators authenticate and trust
            each other's network infrastructure, they can form a
            collective trusted domain. This allows them to collaborate
            and leverage the resources of multiple trusted operators
            when providing services. It is important to consider such
            scenarios and ensure that the concept of a trusted domain
            is flexible enough to accommodate diverse network
            environments.

            How about if the author were to include text similar to
            the following:

            "While in this document we describe a trusted domain
            consisting of network elements from the same operator, it
            is important to note that a trusted domain is not
            necessarily limited to a single operator. In the real
            world, multiple operators can establish mutual trust,
            authenticate each other's network infrastructure, and form
            a collective trusted domain. In such cases, they can
            collaborate and leverage the resources of multiple trusted
            operators to provide services. Therefore, we encourage
            readers to maintain flexibility in understanding the
            concept of a trusted domain and consider the possibilities
            of cooperation and trust among different operators."

            Including such text would provide a clearer expression of
            the author's understanding of the concept of a trusted
            domain and remind readers to consider the potential for
            cooperation and trust among multiple operators in
            practical applications.

            B.R.
            Weiqiang

                *From:* Joel Halpern <mailto:j...@joelhalpern.com>
                *Date:* 2023-08-07 22:10
                *To:* Weiqiang Cheng
                <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>; spring
                <mailto:spring@ietf.org>
                *Subject:* Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification
                for
                draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

                For now speaking personally, although this may require
                chairs' intervention, I do not find the trust domain
                text to be sufficient.   While I am not sure it would
                suffice, I would expect the text that goes with figure
                1 to explicitly state both that the CPE are under
                operator control and that the BRAS, CRx, and Backbone
                devices are all run by a single operator that is the
                same as the operator managing the CPE.  And that they
                form a trust domain or are all part of a single larger
                trust domain.


                Yours,

                Joel


                On 8/7/2023 3:08 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote:

                    Dear Chairs and Group,

                    Wehave updated the draft and addressed the
                    comments received during the adoption call.

                    The main updates include:

                     1. 1) Adding a detailed description of the
                        trusted domain in the Security Considerations
                        section.
                     2. 2) Optimizing the text based on the received
                        comments.


                    For a detailed overview of the changes, please
                    refer to the following diff link:

                    
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01

                    If you have any further comments or feedback,
                    please feel free to share.



                    B.R.
                    Weiqiang Cheng

                        *From:* internet-drafts
                        <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>
                        *Date:* 2023-08-07 14:46
                        *To:* Changwang Lin
                        <mailto:linchangwang.04...@h3c.com>; Geng
                        Zhang <mailto:zhangg...@chinamobile.com>;
                        Ruibo Han <mailto:hanru...@chinamobile.com>;
                        Weiqiang Cheng
                        <mailto:chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>;
                        Yuanxiang Qiu <mailto:qiuyuanxi...@h3c.com>
                        *Subject:* New Version Notification for
                        
draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
                        A new version of I-D,
                        
draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
                        has been successfully submitted by Ruibo Han
                        and posted to the
                        IETF repository.
                        Name:
                        draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
                        Revision: 01
                        Title: Distribute SRv6 Locator by DHCP
                        Document date: 2023-08-07
                        Group: Individual Submission
                        Pages: 16
                        URL:
                        
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
                        Status:
                        
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp/
                        Htmlized:
                        
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
                        Diff:
                        
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01
                        Abstract:
                           In a SRv6 network, each SRv6 Segment
                        Endpoint Node must be assigned
                           a locator, and segment IDs are generated
                        within the address space of
                           this locator. This document describes a
                        method for assigning
                           locators to SRv6 Segment Endpoint Nodes
                        through DHCPv6.
                        The IETF Secretariat
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