Hi Joel,We've submitted the new version as following 
link:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-02.txtPlease
 review it.Best Regards,Weiqiang

        



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 发件人: Joel Halpern  <j...@joelhalpern.com>
 发送时间:  2023-08-09 20:30:49
 收件人:  Weiqiang Cheng  <chengweiqi...@chinamobile.com>
spring  <spring@ietf.org>
 主题: Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification 
fordraft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt

 I look forward to seeing a draft with these changes.

 Yours,

 Joel

 

 
On 8/9/2023 2:43 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote: 
 Dear Joel,
 
 Thank you for sharing your comments. We would like to address each of your 
points as follows:
 
 Firstly, we will explicitly state that the CPE must be operator-managed in the 
text.
 
 Secondly, we understand your reservations about the assumption of 
multi-operator trust domains. We will only cover the situations where different 
arms of the same company operate their portions of the network separately but 
trust each other. 
 
 Lastly, we appreciate your suggestion to rephrase the text accompanying Figure 
1 to make it an active statement about the requirement for all relevant 
components to be part of a single trust domain. We will update the text 
accordingly.
 
 Once again, thank you for bringing these comments. 
 
 Best regards,
 
 Weiqiang
 
 
 
 
  
 
 
 From: Joel Halpern
 Date: 2023-08-08 22:27
 To: Weiqiang Cheng spring
 Subject: Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification for 
draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
 
 
 
 
I have three concerns with this.  The first concern is that I do not see where 
the text is explicit that the CPE MUST be operator-managed.   That seems to me 
to be necessary no matter what one assumes about operator relationships.  

 
 

 
The second concern is about the assumption of multi-operator trust domains.  If 
by that you mean a situation where multiple arms of the same company operate 
their portions of the network separately, but trust each other, then yes, I 
understand how that can be a single trust domain.  However, that is a single 
operator, not multi-operator.  I have never seen any siutation in which 
actually distinct operators trust each other and trust each other's security 
mechanisms enough to be treated as a single trust domain.   And what little 
text we have defining trust domains does not suggest such an interpretation.  I 
am not comfortable with that, and I would expect pushback when we as a WG tried 
to publish the document if we made such an assertion.

 
 

 
Third, as a lesser matter, I would prefer if the text that went with figure one 
started with "This deployment assumes that all of the relevvent componenbts in 
figure one are part of a single trust domain".  That is an active statement 
about a requirement by this document, not a passive observation.

 
 

 
Yours,

 
Joel

 
 

 
On 8/7/2023 10:01 PM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote: 
 Hi Joel,
 Thank you very much for your comments. 
 I agree that all network elements, such as BRAS, CRx, Backbone, and CPE, 
belong to the same operator, and this scenario indeed constitutes a trusted 
domain. However, a trusted domain can indeed extend beyond a single operator. 
In cases where multiple operators authenticate and trust each other's network 
infrastructure, they can form a collective trusted domain. This allows them to 
collaborate and leverage the resources of multiple trusted operators when 
providing services. It is important to consider such scenarios and ensure that 
the concept of a trusted domain is flexible enough to accommodate diverse 
network environments.
 
 How about if the author were to include text similar to the following:
 
 "While in this document we describe a trusted domain consisting of network 
elements from the same operator, it is important to note that a trusted domain 
is not necessarily limited to a single operator. In the real world, multiple 
operators can establish mutual trust, authenticate each other's network 
infrastructure, and form a collective trusted domain. In such cases, they can 
collaborate and leverage the resources of multiple trusted operators to provide 
services. Therefore, we encourage readers to maintain flexibility in 
understanding the concept of a trusted domain and consider the possibilities of 
cooperation and trust among different operators."
 
 Including such text would provide a clearer expression of the author's 
understanding of the concept of a trusted domain and remind readers to consider 
the potential for cooperation and trust among multiple operators in practical 
applications.
 
 
 B.R.
 Weiqiang
  
 
 
 From: Joel Halpern
 Date: 2023-08-07 22:10
 To: Weiqiang Cheng spring
 Subject: Re: [spring] FW: New Version Notification for 
draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
 
 
 
 
For now speaking personally, although this may require chairs' intervention, I 
do not find the trust domain text to be sufficient.   While I am not sure it 
would suffice, I would expect the text that goes with figure 1 to explicitly 
state both that the CPE are under operator control and that the BRAS, CRx, and 
Backbone devices are all run by a single operator that is the same as the 
operator managing the CPE.  And that they form a trust domain or are all part 
of a single larger trust domain.

 
 

 
Yours,

 
Joel

 
 

 
On 8/7/2023 3:08 AM, Weiqiang Cheng wrote: 
 Dear Chairs and Group,
 
 We have updated the draft and addressed the comments received during the 
adoption call. 
 
 The main updates include:
 1) Adding a detailed description of the trusted domain in the Security 
Considerations section. 2) Optimizing the text based on the received comments. 
 

 
For a detailed overview of the changes, please refer to the following diff 
link: 

 
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01
 
 
 
If you have any further comments or feedback, please feel free to share.

 
 
 
 B.R.
 Weiqiang Cheng
 
  
 
 
 From: internet-drafts
 Date: 2023-08-07 14:46
 To: Changwang Lin Geng Zhang Ruibo Han Weiqiang Cheng Yuanxiang Qiu
 Subject: New Version Notification for 
draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
 
 
  
 A new version of I-D, draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
 has been successfully submitted by Ruibo Han and posted to the
 IETF repository.
  
 Name: draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
 Revision: 01
 Title: Distribute SRv6 Locator by DHCP
 Document date: 2023-08-07
 Group: Individual Submission
 Pages: 16
 URL:            
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01.txt
 Status:         
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp/
 Htmlized:       
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp
 Diff:           
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-cheng-spring-distribute-srv6-locator-by-dhcp-01
  
 Abstract:
    In a SRv6 network, each SRv6 Segment Endpoint Node must be assigned
    a locator, and segment IDs are generated within the address space of
    this locator. This document describes a method for assigning
    locators to SRv6 Segment Endpoint Nodes through DHCPv6.
  
                                                                                
   
  
  
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