Thank you for the edits, Gregory! They are much appreciated!

On Tue, Dec 1, 2015 at 2:20 PM, Gregory Varnum <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Few small edits (sorry for delay):
>
> First FB: “is one of the most” - missing the ‘of’ right now
>
> Not sure the one about the theme is as RT worthy as the others.
>
> In the last FB: space missing before “macrophages” and maybe comma after
> that word too
>
> Last T: “Since the outbreak” sounds odd to my ear for some reason - maybe
> “Since the 1980s outbreak” or “Since the outbreak began in the 1980s,"
>
> -greg
>
> On Dec 1, 2015, at 1:38 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Hello everyone,
>
> Here is the proposed social media for World AIDS Day. Thank you for
> reviewing. Will send more as well.
>
> EN:WP World AIDS Day <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day>
>
> Fb: HIV/AIDS is one the most important global public health issues in
> recorded history.
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day
>
> t: AIDS epidemic claims an estimated 2 million lives each year.
> #WORLDAIDSDay
> http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI
>
> t: This year's theme for #WORLDAIDSDay: on the fast track to end AIDS.
> http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI
>
> Like this PD image:
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPortico.jpg
>
>
> EN:WP Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS>
>
> Fb: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, although reconstruction of its
> genetic history shows that the HIV pandemic may have originated in
> Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, around 1920.
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS
>
> t: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, but has its origins dating back to
> 1920s Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo.
> http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ
>
> EN:WP HIV/AIDS <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS>
>
> Fb: HIV is the cause of the spectrum of disease known as HIV/AIDS. HIV is
> a retrovirus that primarily infects components of the human immune system
> such as CD4+ T cells,macrophages and dendritic cells.
>
> t: Since the the outbreak, more than 36 million people have died from
> HIV/AIDs. #WORLDAIDSDay http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx
>
> PD image:
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg
>
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> Michael Guss
> Research Analyst
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