Few small edits (sorry for delay):

First FB: “is one of the most” - missing the ‘of’ right now

Not sure the one about the theme is as RT worthy as the others.

In the last FB: space missing before “macrophages” and maybe comma after that 
word too

Last T: “Since the outbreak” sounds odd to my ear for some reason - maybe 
“Since the 1980s outbreak” or “Since the outbreak began in the 1980s,"

-greg

> On Dec 1, 2015, at 1:38 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hello everyone, 
> 
> Here is the proposed social media for World AIDS Day. Thank you for 
> reviewing. Will send more as well. 
> 
> EN:WP World AIDS Day <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day>
> 
> Fb: HIV/AIDS is one the most important global public health issues in 
> recorded history.
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day 
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day>
> 
> t: AIDS epidemic claims an estimated 2 million lives each year. #WORLDAIDSDay
> http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI <http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI>
> 
> t: This year's theme for #WORLDAIDSDay: on the fast track to end AIDS. 
> http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI <http://buff.ly/1RjQUcI>
> 
> Like this PD image: 
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPortico.jpg
>  
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_AIDS_Day#/media/File:WHredribbonNorthPortico.jpg>
> 
> 
> EN:WP Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS 
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS>
> 
> Fb: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, although reconstruction of its genetic 
> history shows that the HIV pandemic may have originated in Kinshasa, the 
> capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, around 1920. 
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS 
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidemiology_of_HIV/AIDS>
> 
> t: AIDS was first recognized in 1981, but has its origins dating back to 
> 1920s Kinshasa, the capital of the Democratic Republic of the Congo. 
> http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ <http://buff.ly/1XvtNAZ>
> 
> EN:WP HIV/AIDS <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS>
> 
> Fb: HIV is the cause of the spectrum of disease known as HIV/AIDS. HIV is a 
> retrovirus that primarily infects components of the human immune system such 
> as CD4+ T cells,macrophages and dendritic cells.
> 
> t: Since the the outbreak, more than 36 million people have died from 
> HIV/AIDs. #WORLDAIDSDay http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx <http://buff.ly/1NlAxGx>
> 
> PD image: 
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg 
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS#/media/File:HIV-budding-Color.jpg>
> 
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> -- 
> Michael Guss
> Research Analyst
> Wikimediafoundation.org
> [email protected] 
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