On Thu, 28 Jul 2022 21:48:25 GMT, Joe Darcy <da...@openjdk.org> wrote:

>> My feeling still remains.  I don't recall seeing a wording construction like 
>> this except for IFF, which is well-understood.  I think it could be said 
>> more compactly with:
>> 
>> `This implementation only updates the message digest with data actually read 
>> from the input stream when it is on. `
>> 
>> Just my $0.02.
>
> For your consideration, something like:
>  "... This implementation will update the message digest if and only if the 
> stream is on ...."

I'll choose Brad's suggestion. The "if and only if" is for "data read from" 
which is a noun instead of a clause. Thanks all.

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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/9667

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