Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-09.txt

2023-01-25 Thread Viktor Dukhovni
On Tue, Jan 24, 2023 at 10:41:08PM -0800, Rob Sayre wrote: > Then, I would match any mention of "web browsers" with examples of > implementations that do things another way. I suspect this approach might > make for difficult writing, because I don't think anyone diverges from the > browser approac

Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-09.txt

2023-01-25 Thread Salz, Rich
My feedback would be to rewrite all uses of "e.g." and the associated parentheticals. Follow-up sentences will do. Then, I would match any mention of "web browsers" with examples of implementations that do things another way. I suspect this approach might make for difficult writing, because I

[Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-10.txt

2023-01-25 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Using TLS in Applications WG of the IETF. Title : Service Identity in TLS Authors : Peter Saint-Andre Rich Salz Filename

Re: [Uta] I-D Action: draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-10.txt

2023-01-25 Thread Peter Saint-Andre
This is the proper new version. Apologies for the confusion! On 1/25/23 10:00 AM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Using TLS in Applications WG of the IETF. Title