My feedback would be to rewrite all uses of "e.g." and the associated parentheticals. Follow-up sentences will do.
Then, I would match any mention of "web browsers" with examples of implementations that do things another way. I suspect this approach might make for difficult writing, because I don't think anyone diverges from the browser approach. If I'm wrong here, I'd be happy to see it documented. I do not like this idea. If it is necessary, then we should have a sentence near the beginning that says something like “For clarity and ease of understanding, examples are generally represented using Web browser behavior.” Just like we say “TLS users the words client and server,” at the end of 1.5 (terminology). HOWEVER, unless someone has specific deployed examples, I do not think we should make any such change.
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