[Uta] Review draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01

2022-08-04 Thread Fries, Steffen
Hi, During the UTA WG meeting I volunteered to review the latest draft draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01. Thank you again to the Chris, Sean, and Jo for the update to syslog security as it is directly used / referenced in IEC TC57 WG15 documents. I just found some nits in the draft

Re: [Uta] draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01

2022-08-04 Thread Fries, Steffen
Hi Hannes, Just saw your review. Should have pointed to yours as we found similar nits. Regarding to your last point. The text stated in Section 7 was used to show how the draft is referenced in the IEC documents. It was incorporated in the draft IEC document to make the reader aware that there

Re: [Uta] [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-rfc7525bis-09

2022-08-04 Thread Peter Gutmann
Peter Saint-Andre writes: >Given that we already discuss these matters in Section 7.4, I don't see the >need for additional text. The issue that I pointed out is in section 4.1, "General Guidelines", while what you're referring to is buried in the security considerations right at the end. What'