Re: [TLS] Review of draft-ietf-tls-subcerts-07

2020-04-22 Thread Nick Sullivan
Hi Jonathan, A (delayed) thank you for this helpful review. Your input will be incorporated into draft -08. Nick On Thu, Apr 2, 2020 at 6:31 PM Jonathan Hammell wrote: > The draft looks good. I have a few minor nits and suggestions. > > Section 3, Fourth bullet: s/TLS hadshake/TLS handshake >

[TLS] Review of draft-ietf-tls-subcerts-07

2020-04-02 Thread Jonathan Hammell
The draft looks good. I have a few minor nits and suggestions. Section 3, Fourth bullet: s/TLS hadshake/TLS handshake Section 3, Fourth bullet: To eliminate possible confusion, what is meant by "certificate’s working key" could be defined more precisely. Section 3.2, Last paragraph: s/Automated