[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-09 Thread Chris Chiasson
Er, I know it looks strange, but the (pedantically) correct spacing of the em dash is to have no spaces around it. See, for example: http://www.getitwriteonline.com/archive/091502.htm On Aug 9, 2:08 am, "William Stein" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Thanks everyone. I posted a new version here: >

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-09 Thread William Stein
Thanks everyone. I posted a new version here: http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/was/papers/oscas/oscas-ams-notices.pdf On 8/8/07, Robert Bradshaw <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I really think some kind of a closing, final sentence/statement needs > to be placed right before the "full disclo

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Robert Bradshaw
I really think some kind of a closing, final sentence/statement needs to be placed right before the "full disclosure." I'd try and come up with something but I'm exhausted right now. - Robert On Aug 8, 2007, at 9:03 PM, David Joyner wrote: > Hi: > > The version at > http://sage.math.washing

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Chris Chiasson
Strangely, Google Groups converted my em dash into a regular dash. The em dash character can be easily found elsewhere, though. --~--~-~--~~~---~--~~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EM

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Chris Chiasson
Other minor English usage suggestions: (repairs: em dash, em dash spacing, and run-on sentence) "various mathematical facts - no code is given, and the programs are proprietary software some of which only run on hardware many years out of date." -> "various mathematical facts-no code is given.

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Chris Chiasson
I have been resisting a mention of this, but I finally gave in: Do you think "the second author" is a bit awkward, especially right after mentioning a bunch of mathematical software? It is possible that readers could become confused. Ways to deal with this: 1. Use "Your second author... " or "On

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Mike Hansen
Minor fix on page 2: "We probably will believe her, but she knows that she will be required to produce a proof if required." should probably be "We probably will believe her, but she knows that she will be required to produce a proof if requested." --Mike On 8/8/07, David Joyner <[EMAIL PROTECTE

[sage-devel] Re: AMS Notices column

2007-08-08 Thread Timothy Clemans
I think saying that Mathematica is the company that made that claim about needing to know about internals is incorrect since Wikipedia says that Mathematica is produced by Wolfram Research. On 8/8/07, David Joyner <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Hi: > > The version at > http://sage.math.washington