Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21

2023-03-19 Thread Paul Kyzivat
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2023-03-19 IETF LC End Date: ? IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. Note: Th

Re: Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21

2023-03-22 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Hi Linda, On 3/21/23 8:10 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote: Paul, Thank you very much for the review. Please see below for the resolution to your comments. The revision will be uploaded next Monday when the IETF submission opens. Linda I've included some followup comments inline below. [snip] ISSUE (

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21 REVISED

2023-03-22 Thread Paul Kyzivat
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2023-03-22 IETF LC End Date: ? IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before

Re: Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21

2023-03-22 Thread Paul Kyzivat
currently struggling with the review tracking system to get the status change recorded there, but will do so. Thanks, Paul Thank you very much, Linda -Original Message----- From: Paul Kyzivat Sent: Wednesday, March 22, 2023 9:25 AM To: Linda Dunbar ; draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2clo

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21

2023-03-23 Thread Paul Kyzivat
Linda, I finally convinced the review tracking system to recognize my revision to the review. Sorry for the trouble, Paul On 3/22/23 5:07 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: Linda, On 3/22/23 4:48 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote: Paul, Thank you very much. Can you please change the review

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-21

2023-03-27 Thread Paul Kyzivat
ange your review status with this new revision. Thank you, Linda -Original Message----- From: Paul Kyzivat Sent: Thursday, March 23, 2023 10:20 PM To: Linda Dunbar ; draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement@ietf.org Cc: General Area Review Team ; rtgwg@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art