RE: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41

2024-09-02 Thread Linda Dunbar
Rich, Thank you very much for the review. Reply to your comments are inserted below: -Original Message- From: Rich Salz via Datatracker Sent: Friday, August 30, 2024 12:25 PM To: a...@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; rtgwg@ietf

Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41

2024-09-02 Thread Salz, Rich
> In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't > think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list > of terms? I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well. Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document" I was surp