> In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't 
> think those needed definition. Maybe find other words to introduce the list 
> of terms?

I am sorry, I didn't explain myself very well.

Perhaps change "commonly used terms" to "Terms used in this document"

I was surprised to see definitions for "commonly used terms" :)

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