Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-02-08 Thread gregory.mirsky
Hi Reshad, thank you for the great suggestion. Below is the proposed update to section 4.3.1 New State Variables: OLD TEXT This variable is only pertinent when bfd.SessionType is MultipointTail. NEW TEXT This variable is only pertinent when bfd.SessionType is

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-02-08 Thread Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
Greg, this is good. Regards, Reshad. From: "gregory.mir...@ztetx.com" Date: Wednesday, February 7, 2018 at 11:58 PM To: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" Cc: "rtg-bfd@ietf.org" , "gregimir...@gmail.com" Subject: Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round) Hi Reshad, thank you for the great

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-02-08 Thread gregory.mirsky
Hi Reshad, thank you for your consideration. I've came across what looks as simple editorial change. Appreciate your comment. In the second paragraph of section 4.8 Packet consumption on tails the following For multipoint LSPs, when IP/UDP encapsulation of BFD control packets is used, M

Re: WGLC on draft-ietf-bfd-yang

2018-02-08 Thread Jeffrey Haas
Reminder, WGLC ends tomorrow. On Wed, Jan 24, 2018 at 01:22:07PM -0500, Jeffrey Haas wrote: > Working Group, > > The authors of the BFD Yang module have declared their work on that document > complete. Thus, working group last call is in progress for this document. > Please provide your hopefull

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-02-08 Thread Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)
Hi, Greg, When looking for this specific sentence, I got a chance to scan through the document a bit. It seems to me there are still a number of editorials and potentially non-editorials to be fixed. Looking at S4.8 only: BFD packets received on tails for an IP multicast group MUST be c

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-02-08 Thread Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
Greg, I agree “MUST use” doesn’t read well. s/use/expect/ is good with me. Regards, Reshad. From: "gregory.mir...@ztetx.com" Date: Thursday, February 8, 2018 at 12:14 AM To: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" Cc: "rtg-bfd@ietf.org" Subject: Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round) Hi Reshad