Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-07 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
> -Original Message- > From: Mario Loffredo > Sent: Thursday, May 7, 2020 3:43 AM > To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext- > rfc7483bis-00.txt > > Hi Scott, > > please find my comm

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback

2020-05-07 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Thursday, May 7, 2020 3:15 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback Hi Scott, Il 06/05/2020 21:49, Hollenbeck, Scott ha scritto: From: Mario

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-07 Thread Mario Loffredo
Hi Scott, please find my comments below. Il 06/05/2020 20:50, Hollenbeck, Scott ha scritto: Thanks, Mario! More below. From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Wednesday, February 19, 2020 4:17 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback

2020-05-07 Thread Mario Loffredo
Hi Scott, Il 06/05/2020 21:49, Hollenbeck, Scott ha scritto: *From:* Mario Loffredo *Sent:* Tuesday, February 25, 2020 9:02 AM *To:* Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org *Subject:* [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback Hi Scott

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-06 Thread Jasdip Singh
Section 5.1: I wonder which kinds of relationships model both the entity properties "networks" and "autnums". I mean, do they model the reverse relationships between, respectively, a network or an autnum and the related entities or something else? [SAH] Maybe one of the RIR guys can address th

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-06 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
> -Original Message- > From: regext On Behalf Of Patrick Mevzek > Sent: Monday, April 27, 2020 3:51 AM > To: regext@ietf.org > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext- > rfc7483bis-00.txt > > Hello Scott, > > On Tue, Feb

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback

2020-05-06 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Tuesday, February 25, 2020 9:02 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback Hi Scott, here in the following a further feedback: Section 5.3: the type

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-06 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks, Mario! More below. From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Wednesday, February 19, 2020 4:17 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt Hi Scott, here in the following my feedback. Section 4.1

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-06 Thread Jasdip Singh
nbeck, Scott mailto:shollenb...@verisign.com>> Cc: regext@ietf.org<mailto:regext@ietf.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt Hello Scott, Here is my (mostly minor) feedback: 1. 4.8 For consistency with other examples, add

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-05-06 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks for the feedback, Jasdip. More below… From: Jasdip Singh Sent: Tuesday, February 18, 2020 11:28 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott Cc: regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt Hello Scott, Here is my (mostly minor) feedback

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-04-27 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
> -Original Message- > From: regext On Behalf Of Patrick Mevzek > Sent: Monday, April 27, 2020 3:51 AM > To: regext@ietf.org > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext- > rfc7483bis-00.txt > > Hello Scott, > > On Tue, Feb

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-04-27 Thread Patrick Mevzek
Hello Scott, On Tue, Feb 18, 2020, at 07:31, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote: > Lastly, let's > start to talk about any other needed clarifications. Are you aware of > any? Send 'em to the list for discussion. First, please excuse me in advance if I didn't understood things right, as my points below a

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt - Further feedback

2020-02-25 Thread Mario Loffredo
ore I jump into your suggestions and questions. Scott *From:* Mario Loffredo *Sent:* Wednesday, February 19, 2020 4:17 AM *To:* Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org *Subject:* [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt Hi Scott, here in the following m

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-02-24 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks, Mario. I'm waiting to see if anyone else has anything to say before I jump into your suggestions and questions. Scott From: Mario Loffredo Sent: Wednesday, February 19, 2020 4:17 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action:

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-02-24 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks, Jasdip. I’m waiting to see if anyone else has anything to say before I jump into your suggestions and questions. Scott From: Jasdip Singh Sent: Tuesday, February 18, 2020 11:28 AM To: Hollenbeck, Scott Cc: regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-02-19 Thread Mario Loffredo
Hi Scott, here in the following my feedback. Section 4.1.: Change "lunarNIC_level_0" with "lunarNic_level_0" Section 4.2: I would replace "on the Internet" with "on the Web" Section 4.2: It seems to me that, according to Section 3 of RFC5988, the members "value", "rel" and "href" are all req

Re: [regext] FW: I-D Action: draft-hollenbeck-regext-rfc7483bis-00.txt

2020-02-18 Thread Jasdip Singh
Hello Scott, Here is my (mostly minor) feedback: 1. 4.8 For consistency with other examples, add spaces before and after ‘:’ in the publicIds example. 2. 5.1 Similarly, add spaces before and after ‘:' in the entity example. (There could be other places in the whole doc.) 3. 5.3 Should