Thanks, Mario. I'm waiting to see if anyone else has anything to say before I
jump into your suggestions and questions.
Scott
From: Mario Loffredo <mario.loffr...@iit.cnr.it>
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Hi Scott,
here in the following my feedback.
Section 4.1.: Change "lunarNIC_level_0" with "lunarNic_level_0"
Section 4.2: I would replace "on the Internet" with "on the Web"
Section 4.2: It seems to me that, according to Section 3 of RFC5988, the
members "value", "rel" and "href" are all required.
Section 4.3: I would clearly define which members of the "notice/remark" object
are required and which ones are optional by using key words described in
RFC2119. Maybe the second paragraph could be written like in the following:
" Both are arrays of objects. Each object contains an "title"
string representing the title of the object, an "type"
string denoting a registered type of remark or notice (see
Section 10.2.1), an array of strings named "description" for the
purposes of conveying any descriptive text, and an "links"
array as described in Section 4.2. The
"description" JSON value MUST be specified. All other JSON values are
OPTIONAL. "
Section 4.5: I would clearly define which members of the "event" object are
required and which ones are optional by using the key words described in
RFC2119. Maybe the paragraph below Figure 11 could be written like in the
following:
" The "events" array consists of objects, each with the following
members:
o "eventAction" -- a string denoting the reason for the event
o "eventActor" -- an identifier denoting the actor
responsible for the event
o "eventDate" -- a string containing the time and date the event
occurred.
o "links" -- see Section 4.2
Both the "eventAction" and "eventDate" JSON values MUST be specified. All
other JSON values are
OPTIONAL. "
Section 4.8: I would clearly define that both the members of the "publicId"
object are required.
Section 5.1: I wonder which kinds of relationships model both the entity
properties "networks" and "autnums". I mean, do they model the reverse
relationships between, respectively, a network or an autnum and the related
entities or something else?
Section 5.2: Self link's URIs in the example should contain either the ldhName
or the unicodeName. Similarly for other examples including self links to domain
or nameserver objects
Section 5.2: The sentence "Figure 18 is an example of a nameserver object with
all values given." seems a bit mileading to me because the example doesn't
include the "entities" property. Maybe it could be written like in the
following:
"Figure 18 is an example of a nameserver object with nearly all the information
given."
Section 6: Is the "description" property required in the error response ?
Section 10.2.3: Does the "transfer" event action refer to "transfer between
registrars" instead of "transfer between registrants" ?
Appendix C: I would enclose in quotes the word label in the sentence "... It
uses the label attribute..."
Best,
Mario
Il 18/02/2020 13:31, Hollenbeck, Scott ha scritto:
FYI, folks. This is the first version of 7483bis. It contains updates to
address the known errata, described here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7483
I need to fix the Unicode characters again, though. I'll do that with the
next update. In the meantime, I could use help in documenting existing RDAP
server implementations as described in the Implementation Status section.. If
you'd like to include a description of your implementation, please let me know
and I'll get it in. I could also use help in confirming that xml2rfc didn't
inadvertently change anything during the conversion from RFC format back to I-D
format. Lastly, let's start to talk about any other needed clarifications. Are
you aware of any? Send 'em to the list for discussion.
Scott
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Title : JSON Responses for the Registration Data Access
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Authors : Scott Hollenbeck
Andy Newton
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Pages : 80
Date : 2020-02-18
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This document describes JSON data structures representing
registration information maintained by Regional Internet Registries
(RIRs) and Domain Name Registries (DNRs). These data structures are
used to form Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) query
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