Re: [regext] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7482 (5621)

2019-03-07 Thread Adam Roach
Thanks. I have marked this as "Verified." I changed the type to "Editorial." /a On 3/5/19 7:34 AM, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote: OK, I'll confirm it since no one has raised any objections. Scott -Original Message- From: Andrew Newton Sent: Monday, March 4, 2019 4:14 PM To: Hollenbeck, Sc

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration

2019-03-01 Thread Adam Roach
This is my Area Director review for draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration. I have a handful of comments on the document's comments, but none are of the nature that preclude going into IETF last call, which should begin shortly. Please treat my comments below the same as as IETF last call commen

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees-15

2019-01-04 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-fees. It looks to be in generally good shape, although I have marked two of my feedback items below as "DISCUSS". This doesn't necessarily mean they need to result in document changes (as I might be mistaken), but I would like to make sure we address

Re: [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2019-01-03 Thread Adam Roach
James -- When I poked Ben about the delta between -10 and -11, he indicated that there were some additional clarifications he was waiting for. Specifically: I think that James had said: % I'll provide a little bit more clarification around the basis for the use % of a freeform token for the

Re: [regext] Privacy and HR considerations for draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode

2019-01-02 Thread Adam Roach
[as an individual] On 1/2/19 12:10 PM, John R Levine wrote: The 2119 words MUST and MAY are used to signify requirements; although that does imply interoperability as well.  This statement is associated with making the verification code functional, since the verification code represents a sign

Re: [regext] Privacy and HR considerations for draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode

2018-12-19 Thread Adam Roach
[as an individual] On 12/19/18 9:40 AM, Niels ten Oever wrote: On 12/19/18 4:19 PM, Andrew Newton wrote: On Wed, Dec 19, 2018 at 5:22 AM Gurshabad Grover wrote: Privacy Considerations -- The working of the described extension depends on the sharing of data of (or generat

Re: [regext] Privacy and HR considerations for draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode

2018-12-14 Thread Adam Roach
[as an individual] While I might quibble about some of the specifics of the proposed text, I disagree with the characterization of "unhelpful." Both proposed sections, in fact, make an attempt to be actionable. In terms of tendentiousness, one could easily say the same of pretty much any "Se

Re: [regext] [hrpc] Human Rights Review of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode

2018-11-05 Thread Adam Roach
[speaking as an individual] On 10/6/18 00:30, Adam Roach wrote: I strongly support enumerating the concerns raised in the HRPC review as part of this document. Since this came up during today's REGEXT meeting, I wanted to clarify something. I made the above quoted statement assuming

Re: [regext] draft-ietf-regext-org extensibility comments

2018-10-30 Thread Adam Roach
Thanks, Martin. Can you follow up with IANA to let them know that your concerns have been satisfied? /a On 10/30/18 4:54 AM, Martin Thomson wrote: Thanks Linlin, that helps. If these are following existing patterns, that works for me. On Tue, Oct 30, 2018 at 5:43 PM Linlin Zhou wrote: Dear

Re: [regext] [Ext] regarding adopting new documents and milestones

2018-10-29 Thread Adam Roach
[as Area Director] Hi! While I appreciate that the proposal you've put forth is trying to ensure that popular or urgent work doesn't end up getting blocked on lower priority items (and pushed into other venues), we have pretty solid historical data that shows that the approach you're describi

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-09

2018-10-22 Thread Adam Roach
the changes. Thanks, — JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 10/19/18, 6:54 PM, "Adam Roach" wrote: This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-change-

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-09

2018-10-19 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-09.  I have a handful of comments below that I'd like to see addressed prior to asking the IESG to consider the document. Please treat them as you would any other last-call comments. There is also one blocking comment that needs to be resolv

Re: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

2018-10-08 Thread Adam Roach
On 10/8/18 11:52 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: The RFC 2718 normative reference is a bit strange to one that does not normally work in this area. Thanks! This is a good catch of a character transposition. The correct reference here should be RFC 2781 rather than RFC 2718. While this is still tech

Re: [regext] [hrpc] Human Rights Review of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode

2018-10-05 Thread Adam Roach
[as an individual] On 10/5/18 8:17 AM, Thomas Corte wrote: Generally, technical standards are IMHO not the appropriate place for fighting political or societal issues. At the IETF 98 plenary in Chicago, David Clark said something on the topic of human rights that's really resonated with me e

Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-09.txt

2018-08-21 Thread Adam Roach
“lang” attribute, which has the default value of “en” (English). — JG cid:image001.png@01D255E2.EB933A30 *James Gould *Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> *From: *Adam Roach *Date: *Tuesday,

Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-09.txt

2018-08-21 Thread Adam Roach
<mailto:jgould=40verisign@dmarc.ietf.org> *Date:* 2018-08-21 11:17 *To:* Linlin Zhou <mailto:zhoulin...@cnnic.cn> *CC:* Adam Roach <mailto:a...@nostrum.com>; regext <mailto:regext@ietf.org> *Subject:* Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-09.txt L

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-07

2018-08-08 Thread Adam Roach
m:* Linlin Zhou <mailto:zhoulin...@cnnic.cn> *Date:* 2018-08-08 13:06 *To:* Adam Roach <mailto:a...@nostrum.com>; draft-ietf-regext-org-ext <mailto:draft-ietf-regext-org-...@tools.ietf.org>; regext <mailto:regext@ietf.org> *Subject:* Re: Re: [regext]

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-08-07 Thread Adam Roach
*From:* Adam Roach <mailto:a...@nostrum.com> *Date:* 2018-08-07 07:27 *To:* Linlin Zhou <mailto:zhoulin...@cnnic.cn>; regext <mailto:regext@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-regext-org <mailto:draft-ietf-regext-...@tools.ietf.org> *Subject:* Re: [regext] AD Review: draf

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-07

2018-08-06 Thread Adam Roach
ic.cn *From:* Adam Roach <mailto:a...@nostrum.com> *Date:* 2018-07-28 07:04 *To:* draft-ietf-regext-org-ext <mailto:draft-ietf-regext-org-...@tools.ietf.org>; regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org> *Subject:* [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org-e

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-08-06 Thread Adam Roach
On 7/28/18 3:00 AM, Linlin Zhou wrote: Dear Adam, Thanks for your review. I have my feedbacks started with [Linlin]. I'll update the draft based on your comments. Regards, Linlin zhoulin...@cnnic.cn *From:*

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-08-06 Thread Adam Roach
. /a On 7/28/18 3:32 AM, Linlin Zhou wrote: Hi Adam, It seems that this paragraph was generated by the xml2rfc tool. I reread this section and I think it is better to remove this paragragh. Regards, Linlin ---- zhoulin.

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-08-06 Thread Adam Roach
Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 7/26/18, 9:32 PM, "Adam Roach" wrote: This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-08. I have a handful of comments below that I'd like to see addressed prior to asking the IESG to conside

Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09.txt

2018-08-03 Thread Adam Roach
Thanks for moving so quickly on this! I've created an IESG ballot for this document, and it will be scheduled on the next available telechat. /a On 8/3/18 7:26 AM, Gould, James wrote: The IETF Last Call has ended and the feedback received is included in draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09.

Re: [regext] Spencer Dawkins' Yes on charter-ietf-regext-01-00: (with COMMENT)

2018-07-30 Thread Adam Roach
On 7/25/18 7:34 PM, Spencer Dawkins wrote: Adam's ballot comments would have made me think that the consultation with the AD has already happened. No request for text changes (the charter text is clear), but am I guessing correctly that you still want to see more details before telling the workin

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-07

2018-07-27 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-07.  I have a handful of comments below that I'd like to see addressed prior to asking the IESG to consider the document. Please treat them as you would any other last-call comments. There are also two blocking comments that need to be resolved p

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-07-27 Thread Adam Roach
On 7/26/18 8:35 PM, Adam Roach wrote: This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-08. After sending my original review, I noticed one additional detail that should be addressed: "Copyright Notice" section: >  This document may contain material from IETF Docu

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-07-26 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-08.  I have a handful of comments below that I'd like to see addressed prior to asking the IESG to consider the document.  Please treat them as you would any other last-call comments. I also have one comment that needs to be addressed prior to IETF l

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org

2018-07-26 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-08.  I have a handful of comments below that I'd like to see addressed prior to asking the IESG to consider the document.  Please treat them as you would any other last-call comments. I also have one comment that needs to be addressed prior to IETF l

[regext] Adam Roach's Yes on charter-ietf-regext-01-00: (with COMMENT)

2018-07-24 Thread Adam Roach
Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for charter-ietf-regext-01-00: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) The document, along with other

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag

2018-07-15 Thread Adam Roach
Thanks! I have issued an IESG ballot for this document, and it will be scheduled on the next available telechat (which is to say, the next telechat that has not exceeded its maximum page count). /a On 7/15/18 18:11, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote: -Original Message- From: Adam Roach Sent

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-08

2018-07-14 Thread Adam Roach
This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token. Based on what I see, this document is ready to go to IETF last call. The comments below should be handled at the same time as any IETF last call comments. I'd like to start by thanking everyone who worked on this document. Despite th

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag

2018-07-14 Thread Adam Roach
On 6/6/18 06:56, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote: -Original Message- From: Adam Roach ... I read the text as calling for implementors to concatenate "-" to the end of the IANA-registered base URL ("https://example.com/rdap/";), resulting in "https://example.

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag

2018-06-05 Thread Adam Roach
On 6/5/18 8:39 AM, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote: -Original Message- From: Adam Roach Sent: Monday, June 04, 2018 7:32 PM To: regext@ietf.org; draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-...@tools.ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag I've reviewed the document

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag

2018-06-04 Thread Adam Roach
I've reviewed the document draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag in preparation for placing it into IETF last call. The mechanism and document generally look good and useful; however, I have some concerns about its URL synthesis. The mechanical synthesis of URLs as described in this document contr

Re: [regext] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06: (with COMMENT)

2017-12-06 Thread Adam Roach
On 12/6/17 1:40 PM, Gould, James wrote: Mirja, I believe changing the “must” to a “MUST” in that sentence makes sense. Adam, does this need to be added to the normative statement change list for the Chairs? I wouldn't normally for something that's so clearly just an error correction; but si

Re: [regext] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06: (with COMMENT)

2017-12-06 Thread Adam Roach
On 12/6/17 2:11 PM, Gould, James wrote: Adam, does this need to be added to the normative statement change list for the Chairs? Not for just adding a reference. The chairs may point it out to the group if they want to. /a ___ regext mailing list

Re: [regext] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06: (with COMMENT)

2017-12-05 Thread Adam Roach
On 12/5/17 15:34, Gould, James wrote: Ok, I believe whether it’s a SHOULD or a MUST, it would need to go through the working group.  The proposal would then be to add the sentence “When using digital signatures the server MUST validate the digital signature.” to the end of the 2.6.3 “Digital Si

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-05

2017-08-18 Thread Adam Roach
agreement to the set of changes. Thanks, — JG James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 7/25/17, 11:18 PM, "Adam Roach" wrote: EPP Launchphase Authors --

Re: [regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-05

2017-08-02 Thread Adam Roach
On 7/25/17, 11:18 PM, "Adam Roach" wrote: EPP Launchphase Authors -- This is my AD review of draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-05. I have a number of questions and comments about the draft, although I freely admit that many of them may stem from a lack of

[regext] AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-05

2017-07-25 Thread Adam Roach
EPP Launchphase Authors -- This is my AD review of draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-05. I have a number of questions and comments about the draft, although I freely admit that many of them may stem from a lack of knowledge on my part about the operational models in which EPP is deployed. Please b

Re: [regext] interim meetings proposal

2017-06-16 Thread Adam Roach
[As AD] Thanks! I just wanted to add a couple of annotations for the working group. The first note is that the intention here is to be as lightweight as possible. For example, "A 90-minute call to discuss open issues in draft-ietf-regext-example-04" would be a perfectly acceptable and complet