When using the XML2RFC tool (which it seems you may be), there's an attribute of the <rfc/> element called "ipr". This text looks like the "ipr" element is set to "pre5378Trust200902" (or some other earlier string). You probably want "trust200902" instead.

/a

On 7/28/18 3:32 AM, Linlin Zhou wrote:
Hi Adam,
It seems that this paragraph was generated by the xml2rfc tool. I reread this section and I think it is better to remove this paragragh.

Regards,
Linlin
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zhoulin...@cnnic.cn

    *From:* Adam Roach <mailto:a...@nostrum.com>
    *Date:* 2018-07-28 06:12
    *To:* regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org>;
    draft-ietf-regext-org <mailto:draft-ietf-regext-...@tools.ietf.org>
    *Subject:* Re: AD Review: draft-ietf-regext-org
    On 7/26/18 8:35 PM, Adam Roach wrote:
    > This is my AD review for draft-ietf-regext-org-08.
    After sending my original review, I noticed one additional detail
    that
    should be addressed:
    "Copyright Notice" section:
    >  This document may contain material from IETF Documents or IETF
    >  Contributions published or made publicly available before November
    >  10, 2008.  The person(s) controlling the copyright in some of this
    >  material may not have granted the IETF Trust the right to allow
    >  modifications of such material outside the IETF Standards Process.
    This is typically only true of revisions of older documents, which
    necessarily
    obsolete published RFCs. So, to double-check: is this the correct
    boilerplate
    for this document?
    /a


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