Looks good to me. I encountered two things, one missed insert and a
misspelled you->your that I introduced in my comment on the v1. Sorry
for that :/
I marked them inline
Did some changes get dropped or applied in another patch?
The v1 had some changes after line 66. They seem to be missing in
On 2/21/20 7:55 AM, Wolfgang Link wrote:
> Improvement of grammar and punctuation.
> Clarify the HA limitations.
> Remove future tense in some sentences.
> It is not good to use it in technical/scientific papers.
> Rewrite some sentences to improve understanding.
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> pvesr.adoc | 112 +
Improvement of grammar and punctuation.
Clarify the HA limitations.
Remove future tense in some sentences.
It is not good to use it in technical/scientific papers.
Rewrite some sentences to improve understanding.
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pvesr.adoc | 112 ++---
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