On 2/21/20 7:55 AM, Wolfgang Link wrote: > Improvement of grammar and punctuation. > Clarify the HA limitations. > Remove future tense in some sentences. > It is not good to use it in technical/scientific papers. > Rewrite some sentences to improve understanding. > --- > pvesr.adoc | 112 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------- > 1 file changed, 56 insertions(+), 56 deletions(-) >
Aaron, any comment on the v2? _______________________________________________ pve-devel mailing list pve-devel@pve.proxmox.com https://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel