Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Fix minor grammatical and formatting issues

2025-04-21 Thread David Rowley
On Tue, 22 Apr 2025 at 12:27, David G. Johnston wrote: > On Monday, April 21, 2025, David Rowley wrote: >> Does anyone have any opinion on the wording I'm proposing in the attached? > > I like it. It removes the problematic wording and moves the reference to > —all closer to the front to aid in

Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Fix minor grammatical and formatting issues

2025-04-21 Thread David G. Johnston
On Monday, April 21, 2025, David Rowley wrote: > > Does anyone have any opinion on the wording I'm proposing in the attached? > I like it. It removes the problematic wording and moves the reference to —all closer to the front to aid in skimming. David J.

Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Fix minor grammatical and formatting issues

2025-04-21 Thread David Rowley
On Tue, 22 Apr 2025 at 08:53, Noboru Saito wrote: > Regarding "to to" and "that that", I agree that they might be > technically acceptable. > However, I personally find them a bit harder to parse and they > increase the chance of misreading for me. > Your suggested alternative for "to to" is much

Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Fix minor grammatical and formatting issues

2025-04-21 Thread Noboru Saito
Thank you for the review! I appreciate your detailed feedback. Regarding "to to" and "that that", I agree that they might be technically acceptable. However, I personally find them a bit harder to parse and they increase the chance of misreading for me. Your suggested alternative for "to to" is mu

Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Fix minor grammatical and formatting issues

2025-04-20 Thread David Rowley
On Mon, 21 Apr 2025 at 15:06, Noboru Saito wrote: > 1. Remove unnecessary blank lines (blankline.diff) Looks good. > 2. Fix repeated "to to" in several command reference files (toto.diff) -Specifies the name of the database to connect to to discover which +Specifies the name of