[OPSAWG]Re: RtgDir Last Call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-11

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Donald, Thank you for the review. I like the suggestions. I went with almost all of them (except the one about the ToC) as you can see in the candidate version: https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit.txt. Cheers, Med > -Message

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363822] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the review. The changes can be tracked at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-08.txt - draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.txt

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the careful review, as usual. Much appreciated! The diff to track all the changes (including other reviewers) can be seen at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11.txt - draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh.txt

[OPSAWG]Re: Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, Thank you for the excellent review. The changes to address the review can be seen here: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?url_1=https://boucadair.github.io/udp-ipfix/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/udp-ipfix/Joe-Review/draft-ietf-opsawg-ts

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. You may also see the diff that integrates your comments and intdir review: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt - draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt

[OPSAWG]Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Tero, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Tero Kivinen via Datatracker > Envoyé : jeudi 9 mai 2024 17:35 > À : sec...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; last- > c...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet :

[OPSAWG]shepherd review for draft-boro-opsawg-teas-common-ac

2024-05-13 Thread Rokui, Reza
Hi authors, I am document shepherd for draft-boro-opsawg-teas-common-ac. I am preparing the shepherd writeup and have following questions. Question 8. Describe reviews and automated checks performed to validate sections of the final version of the document written in a formal language, such

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread Aitken, Paul
Med, In the new version: 4.1. The first 64 most-significant bits MUST be set to 0. This seems to exclude reduced size encoding. Also, "while Kind 255 corresponds to the most-significant bit of the IE." is nolonger accurate. 4.2 udpUnsfaeOptions Typo: udpUnsafeOptions 4.1 and 4.2: A bit

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] Re: [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread Aitken, Paul
Med, 3.3. Extension headers observed in a Flow with varying extension header chain MAY be aggregated in one single ipv6ExtensionHeadersFull Information Element or be exported in separate ipv6ExtensionHeadersFull IEs, one for each extension header chain. Seems to contradi

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] Re: [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for double checking. I don’t think there is a conflict between 3.3/3.4-3.6 because these are covering distinct aspects of the information export. Fixed the nit. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 22:13 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; drafts-expert-rev

[OPSAWG]I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-12.txt

2024-05-13 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-12.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Extended TCP Options and IPv6 Extension Headers IPFIX Information Elements Authors: Mohamed Boucadair

[OPSAWG]I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-09.txt

2024-05-13 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-09.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Simple Fixes to the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) IANA Registry Authors: Mohamed Boucadair Benoit Cla