Hope these aren't too nit-picky.
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Mark,
This is really useful stuff. Thanks!
However, I agree with Trevor about the LM vs NR style of writing.
The NR needs to be terse and show, rather than tell, the story. In an
effort to be clear, we often try to both tell and show. I spent a lot
of time when I first started writing NR sec
Greetings Mark,
I actually kinda like this writing style, it's more explanatory and
detailed that other NR material but if it can help make things more
clear then I think we should accept it.
The downside is that it "talks through the code" quite a lot, perhaps
you could remove all variable name
I've looked at the compiled version now. It's nicely written, but my
concern is that this is no longer written in 'reference' style. To me,
parts of it seem more suited to the LM. The idea of the NR is that
people already well-familiar with LilyPond can quickly find a keyword or
syntax they hav
A short note about bookpart titles.
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Just a few comments after eye-balling the patch. I'll need to download
and compile to comment more fully.
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Reviewers: ,
Message:
Hey guys.
Here's a complete rewrite of
NR 3.2 Titles and headers.
Please comment. You can disregard the first couple
of patch sets, and go straight to the "First Draft"
one.
Thanks.
- Mark
Description:
Rewrite NR 3.2 Titles and headers.
Please review this at http://cod
