Greetings Mark, I actually kinda like this writing style, it's more explanatory and detailed that other NR material but if it can help make things more clear then I think we should accept it.
The downside is that it "talks through the code" quite a lot, perhaps you could remove all variable names from the main text and use more comments in @lilypond fragments instead? Anyway, LmostlyGTM. http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/diff/13001/Documentation/notation/input.itely File Documentation/notation/input.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/diff/13001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode621 Documentation/notation/input.itely:621: title = "DAS WOHLTEMPERIRTE CLAVIER" Should be Wohltemperierte http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/diff/13001/Documentation/notation/input.itely#newcode634 Documentation/notation/input.itely:634: title = "PRAELUDIUM I" How about PRÆLUDIUM ? http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/diff/13001/ly/titling-init.ly File ly/titling-init.ly (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/diff/13001/ly/titling-init.ly#newcode146 ly/titling-init.ly:146: %% oddHeaderMarkup if it were not defined here These comments are a welcome addition IMO. http://codereview.appspot.com/3667041/
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