Re: [IPsec] IKEv2 bis section order

2009-07-01 Thread Raj Singh
Hi Team, I think we can have Introduction and IKE Protocol View [today's Sec. 1.2-1.5] as Section 1 and move Usage scenario to IKE Protocol Details and Variations. Usage scenario can make more sense after brief protocol description and it's difference with IKEv1. Regards, Raj On Thu, Jul 2, 2009

Re: [IPsec] IKEv2 bis section order

2009-07-01 Thread Paul Hoffman
At 7:36 PM +0300 7/1/09, Yaron Sheffer wrote: >I'd like to propose: > > 1. Introduction > 1.1. Usage Scenarios > 1.1.1. Security Gateway to Security Gateway Tunnel Mode > 1.1.2. Endpoint-to-Endpoint Transport Mode > 1.1.3. Endpoint to Security Gateway Tunnel Mode >

Re: [IPsec] IKEv2 bis section order

2009-07-01 Thread David Wierbowski
Yaron, Your proposed reordering seems fine to me. I agree with moving section 1.7 to an appendix. Moving sections 1.2-1.5 to sections 2-2.4 does not add a great deal of value, but does make sense. I think either way is fine. I have no preference realtive to the section 1.2-1.5 move. Dave Wier