solutions.
>
> Is that second sentence right? If you are giving a general class of solutions,
> that seems agnostic to the particular solution. Just a bit confusing.
Updated.
>
>A host SHOULD be able respond dynamically...
>
> Do you mean "is expected to" instead of "SHOULD"? "SHOULD" seems overdone.
Fixed, thanks!
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> >> My suspicion is that section 7.3 underestimates the availability
> >> (current and
> >> future) of multipath transport.
> You can have the half empty glass; I'll take the half full one. ;-)
As per Magnus's suggestion, I've updated the text to mention that
PA-based multihoming and MP transport could benefit from each other:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-enterprise-pa-multihoming-11#section-8.3
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revious revision of
the document, but looks like it was not ;(
> =
>o Data packets to the router LLA
> SB> LLA? Not in the editors list and not defined as far as I can see,
Fixed.
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ll normative text could be found in section 6.
Do you think we need another paragraph in Introduction (or another
section, 1.3?) explaining the document structure? Or do I
misunderstand your suggestion?
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RFC4861] are specified in Section 6.
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let items, 2nd sentence: delete “the”
> before
> “network resources”.
>
> Page 16, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert “the” before “amount of”.
>
> Page 16, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: append a comma after “perform ND
> proxy”.
>
> Page 16, 2nd paragraph, 4th sentence: delete “a” before “single”.
>
> Page 16, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: append a comma after “case”. Change
> “implict” to “implicit”.
>
> Page 20, acknowledgements: append a comma after “input”. Change
> “contribution”
> to “contributions”.
>
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None.
>
> Minor issues: None.
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:
>
> s/re-start/restart
> s/IA-Address/IA Address
>
>
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ased it to:
"When a prefix's Preferred Lifetime becomes zero, either because the
Preferred Lifetime expires or because the host receives a PIO for the
prefix with a zero Preferred Lifetime, the prefix MUST be removed from
the list."
Is it better?
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