On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 8:16 PM Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> wrote: > Yes, a paragraph in the Introduction explaining the structure of the document > and especially the place(s) where normative text can be found would be > useful. If you add these you may consider deleting other such references > spread in the text.
I'll add the following to the very end of the Introduction: "This document updates the Neighbor Discovery protocol to avoid packet loss in the scenario described above. Section 4 discusses the changes and analyses the potential impact, while normative changes to [RFC4861] are specified in Section 6. -- SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
