Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

Hi Christer, Thanks for your review. Replies/comments inline marked with . We are working on an updated version of the draft to incorporate your comments as well. Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Christer Holmberg via Datatracker Sent: Sunday, March 15, 2020 11:29 AM To: gen-art@

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-data-plane-framework-04

-layer and the DetNet forwarding sub-layer functions as described in the DetNet Architecture. Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Christer Holmberg Sent: Wednesday, April 15, 2020 11:19 PM To: Balázs Varga A ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detnet-data-

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05

Hi Tim, Thanks for the review. Your comments will be incorporated in the next version. Feedbacks are inline below marked with . Many thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Tim Evens via Datatracker Sent: Tuesday, April 21, 2020 12:19 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-detnet-ip

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-05

Hi Tim, Thanks for the explicit suggestions, I agree that makes text clearer. I will update the draft accordingly in the suggested format. Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Tim Evens (tievens) Sent: Tuesday, April 28, 2020 1:48 AM To: Balázs Varga A ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc:

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-06

Hi Christer, Thanks for the review. I agree with all your comments and will be corrected in next version. In detail: Q1, Yes, RFC 7510 statement does apply to this document. Statement will be added to the introduction section. DetNet documents focus on solutions for networks that are under a sin

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-10

Hi Jouni, Many thanks for your review. I will correct the editorial comments. Thanks and cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker Sent: Friday, September 11, 2020 9:40 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model@ietf.org; last-c.

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-05

Hi Vijay, Many thanks for your review. I will fix your nits in the next version. (See inline) Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: detnet On Behalf Of Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker Sent: Friday, January 29, 2021 3:58 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; det...@ietf.org; dr

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05

Hi Paul, Many thanks for your review. I will update the next version with the nits. Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Paul Kyzivat Sent: Wednesday, February 3, 2021 6:20 PM To: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn@ietf.org Cc: General Area Review Team Subject: Gen-ART Last Call revie

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05

Hi Ines, Many thanks for your review. See my reactions and proposed updates below. Thanks Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Ines Robles via Datatracker Sent: Saturday, February 6, 2021 12:57 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: det...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn@ietf.org; last-

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08

Hi Joel, Many thanks for the review. Regarding the editorial comment: - PREOF appears first in the abstract, so it is elaborated there. If You think it is necessary to do so in the introduction as well, we can fix it with the RFC editor. Thanks & Cheers Bala'zs -Original Message- From: Joe