Hi Ines, Many thanks for your review. See my reactions and proposed updates below. Thanks Bala'zs
-----Original Message----- From: Ines Robles via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> Sent: Saturday, February 6, 2021 12:57 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: det...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn....@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 2021-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05 IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-18 Summary: This document specifies the Deterministic Networking MPLS data plane when operating over a TSN sub-network. I have some minor questions to the authors. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Page 5: Could you please describe what the "TSN treatment" comprise? <Bala'zs> TSN treatment means to execute TSN functionalities during forwarding. I will extend the text OLD TEXT: ... All these functions have to identify flows those require TSN treatment. NEW TEXT: ... All these functions have to identify flows those require TSN treatment (i.e., applying TSN functions during forwarding). END - Are the security considerations the same for TSN-unaware that are for TSN-aware nodes? - How are the privacy considerations for those? It would be nice to mention explicitly how or where (I-D.ietf-detnet-security???) the privacy considerations are addressed for TSN-unaware and TSN-aware nodes <Bala'zs> The I-D.ietf-detnet-security contains DetNet specific security considerations. TSN-unaware nodes are out-of-scope in the draft. TSN-aware nodes are part of both the MPLS and the TSN domain, where both domain has its own security considerations, which must be applied. Thank you for this document Ines. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
