Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-drip-auth-24

2022-10-13 Thread Adam Wiethuechter
Matt, Thanks for your quick and detailed review. Some comments in line. -25 will be out in the next 24-hours making corrections based on your comments. Your comments on the use of Wrapper and Manifest are being fixed throughout the document and have been snipped from this reply. 73, A

Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-drip-auth-24

2022-10-14 Thread Adam Wiethuechter
Responses in-line - with extra removed for clarity. 73, Adam T. Wiethuechter Software Engineer; AX Enterprize, LLC On 10/13/2022 3:06 PM, Adam Wiethuechter wrote: From: Matt Joras via Datatracker <mailto:nore...@ietf.org> Reviewer: Matt Joras